Thursday, September 17, 2009

Barder the Flying Dog

Kevin Baileys parents were both in the military. They had no one else to take care of Kevin in the states. so they took him wherever they went. So when they were both sent to Pakistan, they of course took him with them.
They didn't want Kevin leaving the base at all, but there were no other children there, so his parents decided to get him a dog, Barder. Kevin and Barder quickly became best friends. One of their favorite tings to do was dig, Kevin had tried to build a sand castle a few times, but the sand was far too dry.
One day, while Kevin and Barder were digging, they hit a wierd door like thing. They opened it up, only to find a wierd old man with a great big beard hiding inside. The man looked absolutely horrified at first, but then, realising that it was a child and his dog who found him, he quickly thought up a way to trick them into telling no one they had found him.
He told Kevin that he would give him his "Magic Turbin" if he didn't tell anyone he was there. Kevin, of course, grew excited at the thought of a new thing to play with, and agreed. The man said that he needed to preform a spell before it would work, he then spoke a bunch of gibberish, while putting some LSD he had inside the turbin, then handed it to Kevin. Kevin took it excitedly, and asked, "what was that you put inside, Mister?", The old man replied, "Umm... Fairy dust, now when you wear that turbin, you can fly!". "thanks Mister magic guy, I promise I won't tell anyone you're here!" said Kevin.
Kevin then closed the hatch, and covered it up, then put on the turbin. He suddenly felt a strange rush, jumped on Barders back and shouted, "I'm flying!"

1 comment:

  1. THis was amazing, I loved your refrence to osama bin laden. I like how your story didnt take place in united states! Try to work on your sentence fluency so the story flows better.

    ReplyDelete